A night out
Carmel R and Kate A
Ruby and Raf walked into school dance. There were lots of kinds inside. But no one was dancing.
Raf was starting to have fun when he bumped into something. He stopped and looked around. He wanted to laugh. He and Ruby were not alone now. All the kids were coming over to dance with them. The boy were dancing too. They were all having fun. No one was looking at Raf.
I'm not good at dance, but I like to watch. This book talk about dance. The hero likes dancing, but other friends always dancing with everyone, so his friend invited, but he refused, because no reason. I thought he is a man of great pride. I'm great pride, too, because it isn't obedient. He became obedient and he was dancing with his friends. I thought it was good. I think that everyone is more fun than one person. He could know it's fun. I don't like alone, so I have a lot of friend, so I'm fun everyday. I learned from this book that it's important for me to make a friends then we can spend the good time with friends everyday. (203 words)