2017年9月3日日曜日

MAKING HEADLINES

MAKING HEADLINS FAST FORWARD に対する画像結果
~Book contein~
It was just after dark when Brad came back to pick up the computers. He was bending down to take the jacket from under the hedge when he heard us behind him, He turned to look at us as my camera flash went off and I snapped him in the act. I've never seen anyone look so surprised in my life-especially when Ms cramble and two police officers stepped out of the darkness.
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The flash from my next photo lit up Brad's guilty face. When I walked into class on Monday, Ms cramble was holding the newspaper. "Good headline , she said, giving me a funny smile. I yhough she meant:Brad takes notes, police take brad. But then I saw she was looking at a different story.

~My ~
This story is newspaper. Almost students don't read newspaper, but this school class use newspaper, so They must read newspaper. The content of newspaper is job and sports and study and so on. And they read newspaper and they took an interest in the newspaper. They began survey that how many students do you read the newsspaper in the school. The results are almost students newspaper. They read when take a newspaper, and They want to appear newspaper. When I was elementary school students, there are using a newspaper in class. I made a newspaper and I went searching for content. I wasn't interested about newspaper, but this book appear students like newspaper, so they saw an incident in a newspaper and they searched and found man in park. They took a picture. After that police came. They are wonderful and next day they appeared in the newspaper. They could action soon, so this book taught me. If you decide something, should do soon. I'm good at speak English, so I study English now.( 176 words )

3 件のコメント:

  1. Good.

    Try writing a few more if you want to get a credit this semester!

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  2. Almost students
    Most students OR
    Almost all students

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