2017年7月20日木曜日

TRAPPED


Story
Tom tugged the zip on his pack shut again. He didn't know why the looking. There was still nothing to eat inside. He stood up and stretched his legs. Why didn't someone come? Didn't anymore miss him yet?
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Finaly, the music stopped. BANG!BANG!BANG! Tom smashed his fists hard against the glass. Over in the hall, no one even looked up. BANG!BANG!BANG!: Still no one heard. (p16-21)
Tom cli,bed down and raced to the light switch. He turned it off and waited. Then he flicked it on and off, on and off. Next he flicked the switch on and off three times, more slowly. Then again ,three times, faster. Then he started again. He lost sount after his tenth SOS. Studdenly...What was that noise? Tom could hear footsteps running towards the door. I'm in here, he yelled. A key turned in the lock, and the door flew open.

They are good friends, so I play well, but They have quarrelled. Another friend has returned. The friend doesn't talk with him . Then light. They came to the first place. They are afraid of . Though They quarrelled, make friends. I quarrelled with a friend in old days,and I didn't apologize,but I don't quarrel now. I remembered that I quarrelled in a small thing.I quarrelled with one child many times, but the person is best friend. They were left in the dark place. I read this book and thought that the quarrel wasn't good. I do reconciliation immediately
. ( 100 words )

2 件のコメント:

  1. They are good friends, so I play well =
    かれらはよい友達であるので、私は上手に遊ぶ。

    What does it mean?

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  2. You need to separate your own writing from quotations clearly!

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